After long hours of workout,
I step out on the open terrace.
Only to witness the soothing weather
That mesmerises me for a while.
Flowing like some soft music
through my hair, there goes the after-rain breeze
It’s a peaceful night, peaceful after very long
But this breeze is all what it is about.
Rains are beautiful,
These smooth winds after that even better.
So comforting,
As if asking me to forget everything for this moment.
Nights like these are rare in the city.
For this is a place only meant for chaos and clamour.
But once in a while, when the city sleeps.
Nights like these knock on the door, wearing a warm smile.
Not able to get enough of the calmness,
I stand there still.
Trying to soak every ounce of peace,
As it sweeps all my anxieties away, like they were never there.
I move back to head towards my bedroom,
For it’s a long day tomorrow, sleep is necessary.
But this breeze tends to hold me back,
Asking me to stay, stay a little longer.
Smiling, I stop there, staring at the moon,
Eyes closed, drenched again in my thoughts about the wonderful space.
Only if every day and every night could be this harmonious.
The breeze seems to settle, but my thoughts, not.
Never lose that smile. 🙂
Superbbbbbbb………girl…. awesome…….
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Wish u many harmonious nights
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Thank you! And you too 🙂
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Ty dear
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💐😊
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Wonderfully poetic, Rupali! 🙂 Loved it!
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I’m glad you did Dave! Thanks a lot..!! 🙂 🙂
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You’re very welcome! 🙂
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🙂
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so well done! wish we had more rain here in Los Angeles 🙂
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Thank you so much!
And Yeah! But the iconic city of Los Angeles is itself a dream land for many! 😊
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thank you!
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You’re most welcome! 😊
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Wow (only word clicked after reading this )😍 first poem and first impression.
U know how to express emotions in form of words…..anazing
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Thank you so much, Rohit! I’m glad you liked it! 😊
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U really deserve that….just in love with ur words ❤️
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You honour me, Rohit! Thanks a ton! 😊
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It’s amazing how many times the calamity of the cool breezy nights have held me hostage, I know exactly how you feel. It’s hard to escape the beauty of the night sometimes. 😍. This was lovely.
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Exactly! I’m so glad you feel the same way! Thank you! 😊😊
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I do, it happens to me a lot.🙂. Your welcome! 😊
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😍😊
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🌷🌹
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Beautifully written.. amazing
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Thank you so much, Shyamal! 😊
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Wow!!! Just wow 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Anna! 😊
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‘eyes closed drenched again in
My thoughts about the wonderful space
Only if everyday and every night could be this harmonious’
Lovely lines Rupali 🙂💙
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So happy you liked it! Thank you! 😊💐
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You’re welcome 💙
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Wohhh… That’s well written. 😃
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Thank you so much, Anish! 😊
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Sweetest post ever!! Totally loved it… Cheers to the pluviophiles ( i’m one too 😉 )
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Cheers to you too! 😊 Thanks a lot! 💐
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Wow, great piece. I can picture everything. Excellent. 😊🌹
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Thank you so much, Ana! 😊😊
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Love the flow of this piece. Lovely writing style!
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Thank you so much, Linda! 😊💐
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Petrichor…beautifully written…
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Thanks a lot..!! 😊
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Welcome…liking you writing…
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Aww, thanks! 😊
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Exquisitely penned😊
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Thank you so much!! 😊😊
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You’re welcome!!!😊😊😊
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Moments like that are special–to remember and hold in mind and heart.
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Yeah really! Very special! Thanks a lot for reading! 😊😊
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“The breeze seems to settle, but my thoughts, not.”
We all experience such moments
Nice 💕
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Yeah! Thank you so much! 😊😊
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Peaceful recitations
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Yeah! Thank you! 🙂
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I love an after-rain breeze, too, but we’ve had rain, hail and wild winds this last week. Thank you for following me.
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Oh! You’re welcome. Where did you have all this?
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Reno, Nevada…in the Sierra Nevada (near Lake Tahoe.)
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Nevada, oh! That’s great! 😊
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Super!! Smile can be a give reason for someone’s happiness!! The lovely weather you described is my favourite too!!
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Aww, I’m glad! It is the best. Thanks a lot for your read! 😊💐
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Most welcome dear 😊
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That’s a dainty piece!❤ The chilling aura is really soothing ✌
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I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you for your beautiful comment! ☺
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I’ve a certain similar experience of the rain…would love to have your review sometime on my blog😊
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I’d love to, Charu! ☺ Will check it out right now!
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Marvellous .👌.Loved it .I want to Reblog it .
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Thank you so much, Shayra! And yeah! I’ll be honoured that you chose my blog for reblogging. Thanks a lot for the kind gesture and your appreciation! ☺☺
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